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Zeik Hunter
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PostSubject: ~Zeik & the Black Mage~   Thu Jul 24, 2008 8:11 pm

Let me tell you what I went through to get here...
I recieved an anonymous note, with nothing to track it by. This is all the letter said.


Noble Hunter, to learn of your past, meet me outside the southern gate of the city.

I was curious as to what the writer knew about my childhood. So I went, in the dead of night, to the southern gate which was closed. A hooded figure stood outside, like the letter. I could only see a long, black beard. He spoke:
"Open the gate and follow me so I may speak with you further."
As I stepped through the gate and toward the woods, the stranger spoke to me in a hissing droll.
"You have realized that you've descended from royalty. King Tobias and Queen Andrea were proud to have you as a son, although they never showed you to the public. As far as anyone knew, you were never born. What a city, where no one can exist without the Raiders finding out. A shame that the Raiders found you the day King Tobias was murdered. You were found sleeping in the study, in your secret bedroom behind the fireplace."
"Who are you? No one knows me except you and the Raiders. How did you know what happened?" I was furious. A man steps up and tells me what happened when he was never there!
"I WAS a Raider when that operation took place. You can call me Walt Velun. You may know my daughter, Cutlass, the sole person who killed your father that day."I stopped in my tracks. Cutlass taught me advanced combat techniques and gave me the weapons I use today. I could sence she had become attached to be, and I to her. How could she live with the fact that the she killed the father of the boy she fought with side-by-side? Walt continued. "I decided to find some loot while that was going on. When I stumbled upon you, I decided to steal you from your room, take you to the hideaway, and... turn you."He smiled to show his fangs.
"You were the one that kidnapped me? You turned me into a vampire? You're a loon if you think I'll listen to you anymore!" I was ready to swing at the man, but he raised an old staff.

"I'm also a master of Black Magic. I know forbidden magicks no respected mage dares to learn. I showed mercy by turning you! I could have killed you and ended the bloodline years ago. I could kill you NOW! But, I respect your valor too much to kill you. I would much rather distract you while Raiders burn down Medi, much like I am now." I turned around, and there was the city of Medi, up in flames. I drew one blade and slashed at the man, who dodged the strike with ease.
"Like I mentioned before, I don't want to kill you yet. After all, you could easily strike me down. Instead, I'll just send you somewhere where you'll never have the chance to fight back!" He stamped the staff on the dirt and a hole opened below me. I fell into a portal and landed in the outskirts of Midgar, dazed and shocked. I walked into the metropolis to an inn and slept, knowing I may never come back to my kingdom again.


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PostSubject: Re: ~Zeik & the Black Mage~   Fri Jul 25, 2008 3:21 am

Nice Story.

I would make one like this, but I'm already from the VII World.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Zeik & the Black Mage~   Fri Jul 25, 2008 3:50 am

Cloud Strife wrote:
I would make [a story] like this, but I'm already from the VII World.

Yeah, when it comes to background, customs never have expectations working for them. Actual characters from the game have something to go on, but that HAS to be upheld if you are to really be that character. Granted, customs still have to stick with their person, but at least they make up what they stick to. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: ~Zeik & the Black Mage~   Fri Jul 25, 2008 3:53 am

Well said. xD

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PostSubject: Re: ~Zeik & the Black Mage~   Sun Jul 27, 2008 1:30 am

Speaking of customs, is it alright if we make an "Other" sticky, to keep track of custom characters?
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PostSubject: Meh.   Sun Jul 27, 2008 4:49 pm

It'd be kinda long and pointless.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Zeik & the Black Mage~   Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:16 pm

Hence the bio's. Customs are held there. So no need for the Other sticky in general.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Zeik & the Black Mage~   Mon Jul 28, 2008 1:30 am

Neutral Right, right... Understood.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Zeik & the Black Mage~   Mon Jul 28, 2008 8:00 pm

Glad you do.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Zeik & the Black Mage~   Sun Aug 10, 2008 3:35 am

Heh, now that I look above this, and then at Cloud's comment for Hard to Get, I sence a bit of irony.

Anyways, thanks for the sticky. I finally manipulated your minds enough to get a sticky with my supporting creations. However, could you put Cutlass on top and Walt in it at all? I'm not trying to critisize, but I think I should get a say in how my characters should be represented.
(Wow, I sounded like a total douche with this post. I better lay off the Starbucks.)

Oh, and this is what Walt looks like when he's not a sneaky old man.

And this is what he looks like when he is.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Zeik & the Black Mage~   Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:06 pm

Lmfao.

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